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Old 06-05-2009, 03:02 PM   #71 (permalink)
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Thanks Sir Bret. Yeah, ol' Sir Stud is pretty easy to nail.
Now, to get everyone some pussy. Know ya'll have been waiting.
Well, these days my cock is kept WELL fed but some fiction style pussy is always appreciated
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I'll give you a comment on my part as soon as I get the time to read it all. So far so good except I wanted to be a gnomme; sounds much better than dwarf!
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I'll give you a comment on my part as soon as I get the time to read it all. So far so good except I wanted to be a gnomme; sounds much better than dwarf!
Aw yeah. But Cusp is a dwarf with an attitude.
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King Arthur watched through his telescope the progress of Sir Remek, Sir Bret and Mister Kingpole as they rowed to a shallow end of the dock and secured the longboat.
He observed a group of Lesbians gathering to talk to the strangers. They didn't seem to be showing any hostility, so he relaxed a bit. He observed them being escorted toward the town of Mytilene and turned his attention to preparing the Far Side to move to the dock, when they returned.

Within an hour, the longboat returned with the Mayor of the town. As the rowing party boarded the Far Search, the Mayor was introduced to the King, by Sir Remek. He said, "Your highness, I'd like to introduce you to the Mayor of the beautiful town of Mytilene, Big Al, as he is called."

Big Al, bowed low and said, "I am very pleased to meet you King Arthur, even here, thousands of miles from your Kingdom of BetterMan, we have heard the tales of your victory in the Spammer War. You and your Knights are most welcome to the Island of Lesbos and our hospitality, for as long as you would care to grace us with your presence." King Arthur said, "Thank you Big Al, your warm welcome is very appreciated." Big Al added, "I have been told that the horses that you have on board are in dire need of exercise. We have a beautiful stretch of sandy beach that would be ideal. Please, let us take your beautiful ship alongside our dock that we can begin the off loading."
King Arthur turned and gave the order.
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Well shit JP, why do they have to be lesbians? They won't want us soldiers much less our dicks...........
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From post #6 of this adventure.

"The Knights looked at one another, with some shaking their heads. Mister Kingpole said, "I am aware that you probably have never heard of this island, the inhabitants are called Lesbians."
This will be our destination."


Back then, all the inhabitants of the Island of Lesbos were called lesbians.
Only in modern times has the word lesbian been used in connection with female homosexuality, mainly as a direct correlation to the writings of Sappho.

Don't worry Sir Bret, the women of Lesbos will love your big cock.
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"The Knights looked at one another, with some shaking their heads. Mister Kingpole said, "I am aware that you probably have never heard of this island, the inhabitants are called Lesbians."
This will be our destination."

Back then, all the inhabitants of the Island of Lesbos were called lesbians.
Only in modern times has the word lesbian been used in connection with female homosexuality, mainly as a direct correlation to the writings of Sappho.

Don't worry Sir Bret, the women of Lesbos will love your big cock.

Awwww, thanks chief..........
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Guys, Sir Knights and all of you reading this adventure. I know you have all been waiting to sample the lust and desires of the women of Lesbos.
You have been at sea for many months and especially Sir Stud, have been eyeing that knot hole in the apple barrel, but I just don't know how to select a particular character(s) in this story to write about a sexual escapade. Should it be me? Or my Captains, Sir Bret or Sir Remek?
Or Mister Kingpole who has been badgering me to get him some pussy since the "Star Knights" story?
What about all the deserving Knights? I don't want this story to take on epic per portions with trying to satisfy everyone. I could do a generic sexcapade using a few of you or I can take the story in a different direction.
I am submitting the next page, leaving it up in the air. On the one hand, we go ashore and fraternize with the women and the people of Lesbos. On the other, The Mayor, Big Al, betrays us and tries to storm and capture the Far Search.
Let me know which direction I should go.

(Gee, I wonder.)
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Big Al, the Mayor of Mytilene had his soldiers bring the large, cleated ramp to the side of the Far Search in preparation to off load the Knight's horses.
As the horses were brought on deck by the stable hands, they were led down the ramp and onto the dock. The sense of excitement in these finely tuned animals was evident as they were turned loose on the gently sloping beach to frolic and run freely along the waters edge with some, entering up to their belly's. Prancing with heads held high, running like school children on the last day of school.


Sir JonPop secretly worried to himself that it might be a difficult task to get them all safely back aboard when it was time to resume their journey home as they were very high strung and had been confined for a very long time below decks. This, as it turned out, was the very least of his worries.
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You have the vision of the ending. With this in mind, just do what needs to be done, in order to make the story a great read. Bah; with everyone getting a turn. If you have too many characters, the plot and energy are lost in the character sketching. Just use the characters you find have the most to offer, then bring in the rest at a later time. JMO
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Great stuff so far JP!! Hopefully I can read the rest tonight.
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I just read the rest JP. This is fantastic stuff!!

I say that the knights frolic around town and have a grand old time with the women of lesbos. You don't need ot go into detail though about everything. Just as Betterman said, there would be too much going on and the plot and energy would be lost.

We should sail home after having a grand old time on the island of lesbos. Then there should be a huge party upon our return, and the king should be eternally greatful once again.

I think you should write another story of another journey that would graphically detail the knights sexcapades on the island of lesbos. That would be freakin' awsome.
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Such as:

Dark of hair with a beautiful olive complexion, decedent from the Turks that had once fought and gained control of the Island of Lesbos.
She shyly grasped Sir Jayhawk's hand and led him to her bed. Removing her thin dress, she reveled large firm, upright breasts with very dark areolas. Her pubic hair was full and gave no hint of the hot, moist pleasure awaiting. More?
Maybe in the next novel.
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Such as:

Dark of hair with a beautiful olive complexion, decedent from the Turks that had once fought and gained control of the Island of Lesbos.
She shyly grasped Sir Jayhawk's hand and led him to her bed. Removing her thin dress, she reveled large firm, upright breasts with very dark areolas. Her pubic hair was full and gave no hint of the hot, moist pleasure awaiting. More?
Maybe in the next novel.
Yep, just like that! More, more, more!!
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Big Al was delighted to see the horses removed, turned to King Arthur and said, "Please your Highness, you and your brave Knights follow myself and men to the town square in my city of Mytilene, we have a special surprise awaiting."
King Arthur looked at the Mayor and saw a large man that was very handsome, with an infectious smile. His dark hair was shoulder length and combed back. He could feel a sense of unease as he looked into his eyes. Big Al stood with his arm out stretched trying to hurry the King along, but to King Arthur, he seemed too eager. King Arthur stepped back and said, "Thank you Mayor Al, just leave a man to guide us and we will be along shortly.

At this, the demeanor of Big Al changed, he yelled..."NOW!" His soldiers came running from the end of the dock and started up the ramp. King Arthur quickly reached into his tunic and pressed the locking device.
The ramp blew backward and up, tossing most of the soldiers into the water across the dock. Big Al turned red and said, "You will surrender this ship or I will give the order to start killing your prized horses and your stable hands." Sir Jayhawk, from behind, grabbed Big Al by his hair, pulled his head back and put a very sharp knife to his throat.

King Arthur said, "Mayor, tell me why you have done this? Why have you violated our agreement and why, I shouldn't have my Knight slit your throat?" Big Al, knowing it was futile to resist, said, "Because of the treasure that you carry in your hold." King Arthur stepped back, away from Big Al's arms that were now open wide and said, "Why do you think that our ship contains treasure?"

Big Al said, "Because five days ago, the Pirate, Captain Larger, came into port and said that he was after a very large ship that had anchored around a far point. He said that this ship contained vast wealth. He also said that if we would co-operate and give them supplies, that he would give us a portion of this treasure... and what magic are you using to stop my soldiers?
Big Al tried to turn his head to see who had the knife to his throat and received a slice to the neck that brought blood. He dropped his arms and remained still.
His soldiers were still trying to figure a way to board the ship, several had leaped from the dock trying to grab the railing only to be knocked violently away by the force field, now they stood milling around, not knowing what to do.
The Knights at the railing, swords drawn, were immensely enjoying the show.
Sir Stud fell over backwards as an arrow came at his face only to bounce off the field. The Knights roared at Sir Stud flat on his ass and Sir Marty said, "Pretty quick reflexes there for a coonass." And laughed until tears were streaming down his face.
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Thank you Sir Jayhawk, careful with that knife.
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With Big Al securely tied to the main mast, the King turned his attention to the soldiers on the dock.
He said, " Captain of the soldiers, It is impossible for you to board the Far Search, we have your Mayor, Big Al as a prisoner and any violence toward our stable hands or our horses will be met with force."

The Captain of the soldiers told one of the men holding the stable hand, Irish, "Kill him." The soldier raised his sword and an arrow lodged in his side, between the 8th and 9th rib. The soldier dropped his sword, fell sideways and lay still. The Captain looked dumbfounded and said, "You are demons, our arrows bounce back at us and yet you are able to shoot my men?"
Sir Robin Hood, raised his bow and said loudly, "YES! We ARE DEMONS. And a terrible curse will befall you and all of the people of Lesbos, if you do not retreat immediately from this dock."

The Captain, looking very fearful, yelled at his soldiers to, "Run, run away from this vile ship."
Sir Iguana gave Sir Robin a pat on the back and said, "Looks like you saved our ass again, brother."

With the immediate threat gone for the moment, King Arthur disarmed the force field and sent Sir Loki, Sir Stud and Sir Bret to see that the dock was indeed clear. He gave instructions to Irish to let the horses continue to exercise, but to keep them within no further than 100 meters from the ship.

He then turned his attention back to the Mayor and said, "Big Al, you have brought these events upon yourself, one of your soldiers is dead.
What could have been a very pleasant meeting has turned ugly beyond repair. We have NO treasure and I will have my men take you below to inspect our hold and see for yourself."

Big Al stammered, "But... but, the Pirate Larger described to me the riches that you carry and how you defeated three ships in his fleet. Why would he tell such a lie?" King Arthur just shook his head.
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The concealed ramp in the deck that led to the hold, was lowered and a very subdued Mayor was led down into the bowels of the Far Search.
He was allowed to inspect all of the hold, both lower decks, the stable hand's quarters, galley and storage compartment. He then was led to the Knights quarters and then to the Kings cabin. His hands were untied and he was told to sit.

He put his hands to his forehead, and bent over with his elbows on the polished wood and said, "King Arthur, this has been a great misunderstanding. Please forgive my nativity in believing the words of a scoundrel such as Captain Larger, and my greed. The town of Mytilene has been very desperate since we were able to drive out the Turks. We are in desperate need of money to rebuild the infrastructure that had been destroyed and looted during this time. I was very surprised when I saw the Far Search enter our harbor alone, as I thought that you would be defeated and captured by the Pirates. Please tell me your majesty, what happened to the Pirate Captain, Larger and his ship?

King Arthur recounted the story and the battle between the Pirates, his Knights and the two ships between the rocky points. He further explained that the Far Search had been given to him by a very powerful Sorcerer named Slanker and was unlike any other ship in the world.

He went on to say that, the Knights of the Round Table from the Kingdom of BetterMan, had been in several more battles and adventures since the Spammer War and that he wanted to take his Knights on holiday as a sea voyage.

A master map maker, Mister Kingpole had approached him with the tales of an island named Lesbos that would be an ideal adventure and could be completed within a four month time frame. King Arthur said that this suited his plans and had also been told by his Wizard Sir Merlin, who could look into the future, that there was a poetess named Sappho that would one day write poems of such epic beauty that they would become world famous.
Being somewhat of a romantic himself, he very much wanted to meet this women that would have, in the centuries to follow, a great impact on the lives of women.
That they had been mistaken on their voyage for a Galleon that was carrying treasure, was an unfortunate consequence of having such a large and beautiful ship. He then told Big Al of the battles that had taken place on the open sea and why that influenced his decision to anchor the Far Search, out of sight.
He made no mention of their real reason for the journey.
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King Arthur finished his explanation to Mayor Al as to why there was no treasure aboard the Far Search and sat back in his chair waiting for Big Al to respond.

Big Al raised his head, looked King Arthur in the eye and said, "Sire, I pray that you can find it in your heart to forgive my betrayal. Can we just put all that has happened aside, and let me throw open my city of Mytilene for your pleasure and enjoyment?
King Arthur saw a man that was red of eye and seemed very sorrowful and contrite. Yet, he could not bring himself to put his trust in a man that had so blatantly betrayed himself and his Knights.

However he did say, "Mayor Al, we need supplies for our return journey to my kingdom of BetterMan.
We will pay you in gold for the things you can provide. This will help your economy, but your city remains closed to myself and my Knights and crew. Furthermore, I want you to order your soldiers to remain away from the beach and dock while our horses are brought back aboard our ship.

Mayor Al, agreed to what the King said and asked for a list of the supplies that the Far Search would need, saying, "I will assist in any way that I can, your Highness." King Arthur stood and offered his hand to the Mayor. The two shook hands and King Arthur gave the orders to have a list of needed items prepared.

When the list was completed by the Master Chef and Irish, it was given to the Mayor. It included only live animals. Two cows that were lactating, chickens, several young pigs, 2 goats and three lambs.
The produce was to be fresh and unbruised. Lemons, apples, oranges, flour, salt and lard. Hay, fresh greens and oats for the horses.
Many more items were listed but all were in keeping with the thought that betrayal in the way of poisoning could be a possibility. King Arthur was not a man to put his trust, lightly, in an untrustworthy man.

With this done, Mayor Al was allowed, under the watchful eye of Sir Robin, to leave the ship.
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Even though the majority of the Knights were disgruntled over not being allowed to go into the city of Mytilene, they appreciated the reason. Except for Sir Stud.
He was telling everyone that would listen that if someone would help him hold a damn sheep, he was going to fuck it's brains out. Of course, he was just being Studly and was making everyone laugh.

King Arthur was relieved to be underway again and as the Far Search cleared the harbor of Kalioni Bay, he silently thanked the Lord that they were finally headed back home.
He also knew that the Knights needed some quiet time ashore, somewhere, that they could release their sexual frustrations.
All the Knights were in tip top physical condition and as such had the strong urges that only a woman could fulfill.
He approached Mister Kingpole and asked if there was another place that they might stop on their return journey, that would be suitable for some time ashore. Mister Kingpole told the King that he would consult his charts and weigh all the possibilities. King Arthur thanked him and returned to his cabin.
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Mister Kingpole approached Sir JonPop and said that the King had asked him to
find an island where the Knights could have some R&R. He further stated that he would like to have a vote from the Knights on several islands that he thought might be suitable for this purpose, but that he couldn't guarantee that there would not be problems with any of them. Sir JonPop said, "Submit the list with the details and the best choice first and I'll gather the Knights and we'll have a discussion with the King."
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It has been said, that Daedalus, the father of Icarus, was buried on Ikaria a small island in the
Eastern Aegean Sea.

A temple was built in his honor by the Romans that occupied the island of Ikaria for many centuries.
They were defeated by St. James and his Knights and they ruled until being conquered by the Turks.

The King and Knights were taken by the epic myth of Icarus flying too close to the sun and the wax on his wings melting.

Mister Kingpole agreed, that this would be perfect, as this was one of his choices.
He had heard that the harbor was deep, wide and the people welcomed guests.

This is the Island the we are now heading to, aboard the Far Search.

Ikaria Myths: The fall of Icarus

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Entering the harbor, they could see deep into the clear turquoise water.
Maybe 300 meters below the ship, the wrecks of vessels that appeared to have been there for many centuries and few newer wrecks with cannon strewn about the white sandy floor could be seen.

The Knights all agreed, that at some point, there must have been some fierce battles in the waters off Ikaria.
The wide lagoon was rimmed by a white sandy beach and a newer looking dock jutted out into the water.

The Far Search was flying the neutral colors of the Kingdom of BetterMan and dropped anchor just out of range of any possible cannon fire that might come from the island. The order was given to lower the boat and again, Sir Remek, Sir Bret and Mister Kingpole were asked to row ashore and ask permission to dock.

This time they returned with a boatload of beautiful young women and a representative from the capitol city of Oinoe, which translated in the Aeolia and Thessalian dialect meant "Wine".

As they came aboard with the women being helped by many eager hands, Sir Remek said to King Arthur, with a large beaming smile, "The Monks from the Monastery Theoetistis, were kind enough to give these ladies a break from their duties of picking grapes, for the remainder of the day. Father ReetB sent them as goodwill ambassadors to show their friendly intentions and to welcome us to the Island of Ikaria. I'd also like to introduce you to Phibbyshammer so called because he is the town's Blacksmith and barrel maker. His name is Hue." King Arthur took the hand that was offered and the two men heartily shook hands.
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The mood was festive as the boats rowed ashore. The women and Knights had split into two groups and there was much laughing and splashing of water with the oars, at each others boat.

King Arthur had decided to remain behind, as did Sir JonPop, Sir Remek Sir Marty and all but four of the stable hands. The Master Chef, Nacho, was delighted to go ashore. He was anxious to try new dishes and sample Turkish cooking with a Greek influence.

He had told the Knights, that because of such a small contingence left aboard, that he was activating the force field, and to have a great time but always be watchful for trickery.

As the boats came close to the shore, men waded out to pull the boats up on the sandy beach.
The crowd was quite large, trying to get a glimpse of the Knights whom it seems, everyone had heard tales, about.
The women that had been on the Far Search, were quite possessive of their Knights and were hanging on to their arms as they made the walk from the beach.
The square in the center of Oinoe, was decorated with flags and colorful bunting, as if to welcome returning heroes. The Knights felt quite taken by this display of friendliness by the people and all wore broad smiles, as they were escorted to tables and chairs reserved for them.
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It was obvious that Sir Stud wasn't hearing much of the Mayor's welcoming speech, as his girl was clinging to him like a worn shawl, draped over an old persons shoulders.

She was kissing his neck and caressing his face and it was very easy to figure out what her intentions were, when she and Sir Stud suddenly disappeared.

Now that the distraction had left, the Knights begin to listen more closely to what the Mayor was saying.

"And gentlemen it is with great pride that we are able to offer you this feast we have prepared in your honor."

With that, the Mayor resumed his seat and clapped his hands. A bevy of serving people started carrying in platters loaded with food.

Although a Master Chef, Nacho had only limited supplies to work with aboard the Far Search and the Knights were tiring of some of his efforts. He had tried many combinations with different spices and although some dishes were very good, some went over the side. One particularly bad meal was being dumped by Sir Stud who said to the fish, "I hope ya'll don't get sick."
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The woman that had 'chosen' Mister Kingpole was sitting on his lap, feeding him delicious bites of savory Lamb and saying, "I love map makers, my Father was a map maker until he sailed away and got lost." She giggled at this, making her very large breasts bounce. She added, "I would love for you to show me some of your maps, would you come home with me?" Mister Kingpole decided he could eat later. He took her hand and was led away. Slowly the tables were becoming empty of Knights as they too decided that they would rather have sex than eat.


Dark of hair with a beautiful olive complexion, decedent from the Turks that had fought and gained control of the Island of Ikaria.
She shyly grasped Sir Jayhawk's hand and led him to her bed. Removing her thin dress, she reveled large firm, upright breasts with very dark areolas. Her pubic hair was full and gave no hint of the hot, moist pleasure awaiting.
Sir Jayhawk, lay back on the bed and with outstretched arms, pulled this woman down to his naked chest and begin to kiss and caress the side of her neck. Her firm breasts and large nipples were setting his skin on fire and he rolled out from under her. They lay side by side, kissing and caressing each others bodies with hot passion. Finally, the urge overcame Sir Jayhawk and he rolled on top of her and inserted his penis into a very hot and throbbing pussy. She exclaimed, "Ooof, my Knight... and put her hands to his chest to stop him. You are very large, please go slow that I might have the pleasure of every bit of this massive penis that you possess."
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Early the next morning, King Arthur was startled from his bed by a shout from Sir Remek at the railing saying, "Boat approaching."
He looked out of his cabin door and saw that it appeared to be Mister Kingpole and two stable hands rowing toward the Far Search. He dressed and went down the stairs to see why they had returned. He prayed that it was not bad news.

The King deactivated the force field and as the boat got closer, heard Sir Marty shout, "Is everything all right?" Mister Kingpole said, "Yes, Sir Marty, please lower the boom ropes and hoist us aboard."
When the boat had been swung onto the deck, King Arthur said, "You have returned early from the three days leave I have given you, is everything good with the Knights, how are the people treating you, is everyone safe? Mister Kingpole said, "Your Highness, I will answer your questions in the order that you have asked them. I can't say about the Knights, it seems that everyone of them went off with a woman.

The people of Oinoe are wonderful, and the feast and wine was magnificent. I had to return because the woman that I was with was insatiable, she would not let me stop. I finally had to sneak from her bed and luckily I found two of our stable hands asleep at the table and got them to row me back to the ship.

The Knights gathering around to hear this, were laughing and hooting that Kingpole had gotten pussy whipped. To which Mister Kingpole replied angerly, "Six times is enough even for you Knights. I absolutely could not hold her off any longer."

Sir JonPop stepped forward with a grin on his face, put his arm around the shoulders of Mister Kingpole and said, "Six times? That is worthy of any one of us Knights. Go get some rest, you look pretty tired" To which Mister Kingpole having been up all night, agreed.
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Coming soon. The return voyage.
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The hung over Knights and stable hands were given a full day and night to rest and recuperate from their shore leave. The Far Search had been given many provisions and several large casks of fine wine from the people of Onioe. In exchange, Sir JonPop had laboriously written out on fine parchment, the instructions for the penis enlargement exercises as a gift to the men of the city as the Knights large penis', had become the talk of the town.

It was a beautiful morning and a brisk breeze was starting to come up, as the sun was rising.
King Arthur told the assembled crew, that he wanted to get underway as soon as possible, after breakfast.
The Knights sat around the long table, eating and telling each other tales of their time on Ikaria.

Of course Sir Stud had to brag how he had worn out his girl after just three times, but that she had a sister that could outlast even the mighty Studly. The Knights and the King laughed heartily at this and exchanged looks that said, "Maybe?" Sir Stud added, that he didn't even want to think about sex for maybe another 6-7 hours, which brought even more laughter.

The Knights scrambled up the rigging and unfurled the sails to catch the morning wind, to start their long voyage home to the Kingdom of BetterMan.

They had just turned about and were about to enter open waters, when Sir McB from the crows nest shouted down, "Ships, dead ahead, about two kilometers." King Arthur shouted up, "How many are there?"
Sir McB shouted down, one, two, three, f...Six your highness." King Arthur shouted, "Furl the sails."
The Far Search came to a slow stop as King Arthur scanned ahead to see what the ships were doing.
They had formed a blockade and were waiting for the Far Search to exit the harbor.

King Arthur said, "Well gentlemen, it looks as if our return voyage has taken a twist. It seems that the pirates have again, found us. They are sitting still with sails furled. We might be able to run up all the sail we have and with the wind coming from the coast, flank the last ship on the right, before they can get under way. Hop to it men, lets kick the Far Search into gear."
With all sheets to the wind, the Far Search leaped forward like a high spirited race horse and sailed toward the waiting ambush.
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Even with the brisk wind blowing directly from behind and the Far Search under full sail, King Arthur saw that they were not going to be able to clear the pirate ships. The pirates had unfurled their sails and were tacking to close the gap at the end of the line.

King Arthur yelled for the men to man their cannons and had Mister Kingpole turn toward the approaching vessels.
At the last moment Mister Kingpole turned broadside to the nearest ship and the Far Search lost all momentum. As they sat dead in the water, two of the pirate ships approached from either side at ramming speed.

They hit the Far Search hard in the bow and stern. The big ship gave a shudder and bent in the middle. King Arthur could hear the horses and men in the hold, screaming in pain as they were being crushed by the bulkhead of the ship. The Far search keeled over hard to port and sucked up massive amounts of water as the hull sprang back.

He could see people being flung from the deck into the water and felt his ship starting to sink.
He was powerless to do anything, to stop what was happening.

As the crystal clear water closed over his head he could see everything floating from the deck and his Knights trying to swim to the surface only to be pulled down by the suction of the sinking ship.
He saw Sir JonPop float by with half his torso missing and Sir Remek, without a head.

He had to breathe, he took a huge breath....
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The King gave a mighty gasp.

Soaking wet, he sat straight up in the bed and yelled, "OH, NO!"
His daughter Susan had been sleeping in a chair and sprang to his side and said, "Oh Father, you are awake." She could see by the light of the single candle on a small table, that he was sitting up.

She put her hand on his wet brow and said, "It seems that your fever has broken, thank the Lord."
King Arthur was swinging his head around in a panic, reaching out his arms as if to grasp something, trying to speak, but no words were forth coming.

Susan said, "Father, I shall be right back," and ran to the door. She shouted, "Mother, MOTHER, come quickly, the King is awake."

In a few moments Queen Guinievere still dressed in her night clothes, ran into the room and grasped the startled King in an embrace.
She said, "Oh my husband, my Lord, I am so happy that you are finally awake. You have been unconscious for almost two weeks now, with a raging infection and high fever."

The King finally found his voice and in a raspy tone said, "Where am I? Where is my ship and where are my Knights? He was still grasping with the fact that he was not drowned.

Susan said, "Father, you have been very ill, you have been dreaming.
Only the great powers of Sir Merlin and our dedicated physician have saved your life"

King Arthur, his voice getting stronger, said, "No it was not a dream, we were gone for many months, the islands.... My ship, the Far Search, my Knights...Where Are My Knights?"
The physician entered the room followed by Sir Merlin. The doctor told King Arthur to lie back, that he would be all right now and needed to regain his strength. The King was insistent that he wanted to see his Knights. A servant was sent to rouse the Knights that were staying in the castle.
Shortly, Sir JonPop arrived followed by a few of the others.
They had been staying in the castle since the King was put into a coma by Sir Merlin, so that the Physician could remove the infection from King Arthur's hip, from an old wound received from a stabbing, when the Queen was kidnapped.
The infection had gone unnoticed for months before flaring up.
Sir Merlin had used magic potions and herbs to clear the infection. Now the King was awake and was insisting that he had not been dreaming.

Sir JonPop walked to the side of the bed and bowed low. He said, "My Lord, it is so good to see you awake. Most of your Knights are here except for our four brothers that retired, Sir Marty, Sir Uber....
King Arthur interrupted saying, "But Sir Marty was with us on the Far Search and Sir Remek had no head....Could it have all been a dream?" At this point, the Physician stepped in and said, "Your Highness, you must rest.
As Sir JonPop was leaving he stopped, turned around and said, "Sir Remek had important business matters to attend to at his castle in the Kingdom of PEG, but has been informed, every day by runner.
I will send for him. Now please, Sire, do as the Dr. says and get some rest and I will see you in the morning when you are stronger.
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EPILOGUE:

Sitting at the Round Table, The King finally admitted that the adventure that they had undertaken was a drug induced dream. He had recounted from very vivid memories, all of the adventure from day one.
The quest for the magical water on the island of Lesbos, their sea battles with the pirates, the people he had met and spoken with and the final battle where the Far Search was sunk.
At this part in the telling, King Arthur was visibly shaken and adjourned the meeting.

The Knights had been enthralled with the King's story and left the room talking in quiet whispers amongst themselves.

The End.




Writers note;

I had many endings in mind, but even though we could have defeated the pirate fleet, or out run their best ships, I wanted to do something different for this, my last novel. JP
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Dark of hair with a beautiful olive complexion, decedent from the Turks that had fought and gained control of the Island of Ikaria.
She shyly grasped Sir Jayhawk's hand and led him to her bed. Removing her thin dress, she reveled large firm, upright breasts with very dark areolas. Her pubic hair was full and gave no hint of the hot, moist pleasure awaiting.
Sir Jayhawk, lay back on the bed and with outstretched arms, pulled this woman down to his naked chest and begin to kiss and caress the side of her neck. Her firm breasts and large nipples were setting his skin on fire and he rolled out from under her. They lay side by side, kissing and caressing each others bodies with hot passion. Finally, the urge overcame Sir Jayhawk and he rolled on top of her and inserted his penis into a very hot and throbbing pussy. She exclaimed, "Ooof, my Knight... and put her hands to his chest to stop him. You are very large, please go slow that I might have the pleasure of every bit of this massive penis that you possess."
I love this part!

That was a magnificent story Sir Jonpop. I was hooked from start to finish. I think the proper ending would have been the actual fulfillment of King Arthur's dream...

...So it was then, the Knights set off on the Far Search to seek the magical water with their beloved King Arthur.

What the fuck JP!!?? This is your last novel? Will there be anymore stories of the knights?
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Yeah, Jay. The adventures of the Knights has come to an end.
6 novels are all I have to give*. I am so glad that you enjoyed the stories.

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